Viktoria Marie Smith

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ViktoriaMarieSmith
<<Played by Dreamer>>

Shine a light through an open door

Full Name>>Viktoria Marie Smith
Nicknames>>Tori
Age>> 9/23/98; 15 Years Old
Staff or Student>> Student
House>> White Ribbon House
Gender>> Female
Sexuality>> Hetrosexual (straight)
Face Claim>> Bella Thorne

Turn away 'cause I need you more

Personality>> Tori is a full-blooded country girl. She might have had some trouble in her life but that does not stop her. She was really close to her grandfather and he helped her through a lot. He unfortunately died 3 years ago of cancer and she had a lot of trouble getting over it. She finally realized she could live his legacy through her riding and has put 110% into it.
Tori loves to sing and do cheerleading. She might not always fit in with the other girls but she tries. She is usually ignored and laughed at by the kids at her old school but here she hopes to fit in more. She is an all around kind and loving girl.
Likes>> Teaching clinics, Working with vets, Helping around the farm, Hanging out with friends, and working with difficult horses.
Dislikes>> Sitting still, Being inside for more than a few hours, Being ignored and looked down upon, Possums, and being made fun of.
Fears>> Being rejected and embarrassed, Cougars.
Hopes>> To succeed in riding professionally through what she learns. To make a lot of new friends and fantastic memories.
Secrets>>

She was beaten by a babysitter as a child.

It’s the way I’m feeling I just can’t deny

Appearance>> Tori has auburn hair and blue eyes. She's muscular from throwing hay at the farm. She has a pretty face, but she doesn't think so. She tries to look nice, but because everyone ignores her she doesn't think it helps. You will probably catch her wearing jeans and a nice country shirt with her boots on her hair down and her cowboy hat on. She might not be a girly girl, but she doesn't mind wearing skirts, but only if she has to. No matter what she tries to do to her hair it won't work. Her hair is stick straight and wont do anything other.
Markings>> A couple scars on her legs from staff infections.

But I’ve gotta let it go

Medical History>> Plenty of staph infections. She have only broke two fingers and three toes, but no major bones.
Criminal History>> No
Full History>> Before Tori was born, her father packed up and left. Her mother didn't talk to her about it very often. When she was twelve her grandfather died. At the funeral she saw a man that had only heard about, but her mother said she saw his face almost everyday. She walked up and asked him if he was Mr. Smith and he said yes. They ended up talking more and after twelve years of not even knowing who her father was and now there he is.
Her grandfather taught her everything about horses after he died she wouldn't ride for two months. She decided to sell her horses, King and Lil' Bit. When her mom made her come and watch a potential buyer ride King and Bit she realized only she could get their full heart into it. After that she got back into riding realizing that she could live her grandfathers legacy through her riding. She realized to grieve for him by doing what they loved together most not by giving it up. She has gotten back into riding and is doing very good. She hopes to learn a lot here at BRRA and hopes to make new friends too.

We found love in a hopeless place

Pet Name>> Beauty
Registered Name>> Black Beauty
Age>> 4 Weeks
Gender>> Male
Species>> Feline
Breed>> Bombay
Registry>> CFA
Personality>> Beauty is a frisky, crazy kitten. He loves to play and most of all sleep. He is very quiet, well most of the time, when he wants some attention he will meow a little. He is really a good for being a kitten.
History>> Tori bought him from a respectable Bombay cat breeder. She had been looking for a cat and when she saw the kitten he stood out. He reminded her of herself. He was kind of ignored buy his siblings but the second he saw Tori he came straight to her. He has been with her ever since.
Appearance>>s1050.photobucket.com/user/blueridge_academy/media/Animals/bombay-kitten-5-11-2001_zps2b0a4153.jpg.html

[CaraGenie]

Hey there! Just a few changes. :- )

*Your photo needs to actually give us an idea of what she looks like. The photo you have is blurry, and is too zoomed out. Maybe it could be the photo for her horse?
*5 likes, not 4
*2 hopes
*Your secret needs to be something that would hurt her if it came out
*How is she muscular and slender at the same time? They're kinda exclusive.
*It's not 'staff' (We're not infectious), it's 'staph', which is short for Staphylococcus Aureus.
*Why do you have first person in your medical history?
*Please break up your history into paragraphs.
*That kitten is not 4 months.
*If he's a shelter cat, he won't be registered, and won't have a registered name.
*Are both pictures uploaded to the photobucket account?
*The image for Beauty should be a link, not an image.
*The History needs to be broken into paragraphs.

[Stern]

Just a few more things.

*No reputable breeder would let a cat out of their hands at that age.
*Please explain who Mr. Smith is in her history
*There's no mention of her being beaten by her babysitter in her history, and how does that affect her now? Maybe she cheated on a test, hid something health-related on her horse's vet check to sell them, stuff like that.