Ashford, Alison Windefred

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ALISONWINDERFREDASHFORD
<<Played by Goose>>

Shine a light through an open door

Full Name>>Alison Winderfred Ashford
Nicknames>>Ali,
Age>> 9/12; 16
Staff or Student>> Student
House>> white ribbon
Gender>> Female
Sexuality>> Heterosexual
Face Claim>> Liz Giles

Turn away 'cause I need you more

Personality>> Alison is a victim of bulling. She was severely bullied at her old school, to that extent, she is shy and reserved around people she doesn't know. She tends to shy away and look down around people, and most people take it that she is anti- social. She is not. Alison loves to talk to her freinds and she likes to hang out with them. She likes to tell jokes, but she  can not get over the whole bullied thing. She'd rather be cuddled up watching a movie with her freinds at home, or on a trail with buddy and a canteen of water.
Likes>>
Buddy her horse,Sunny days,walking on the school grounds,hanging out in the rec room,Ice cream
Dislikes>> People she doesn't know. homework,being bored,rainy days,losing at a game.
Fears>> Dogs, wild horses.
Hopes>> To break her stupid fear of being bullied again, and to hopfully fix a horse like her.
Secrets>> Bullied at her old school about her parent's divorce and her Horses.

It’s the way I’m feeling I just can’t deny

Appearance>> Alison stands in at 5'4 and lbs, she has long hair that is slightly curled and almost always not her regular brown color. She Loves to wear Plaid shirts and jeans and boots when working and blue ridge's uniform when not. She enjoys hanging out in her work clothing, and she has a few scars...no more noticed then the one on her leg- a childhood accident when she fell from a ladder while working on her family farm. the scar has always defined her and has made her slightly fearful of what could happen if she let anyone, try to help her.
Markings>> A small scar on her left leg from a fall as a child.

But I’ve gotta let it go

Medical History>> broke her hand trying to break a horse.
Criminal History>> Nope
Full History>>on December the 21th, Alison Winderfred Ashford came into the world at 7:45 pm weight 6 lbs 7 oz, and was Thomas surprised it was a girl! the Ashford's had always wanted a boy and they got a daughter who, once they got home with her, was promptly handed over to a bevy of Nannies, and housemaids to be cared for.Silk dresses adorned the little girl and she was always either at her mother's parties, or sitting upstairs entertaining her self with her own tea set. As Rose got older tho she started to be schooled at home and by the time Alison turned 11,she was a different girl... no longer would Alison wear pretty dresses, she preferred to wear plaids and listen to punk rock. no longer were mother daughter days a fun time... more like a drag. With a distant mother, non existent father since he took off on Alison and her mom, Alison was bullied a lot at school.. she was told her was the reason for her father taking off, that she wasn’t worth anything, and it effected 

We found love in a hopeless place

[CaraGenie]

Hey Goose. Your app is well written, however there are a couple of inconsistencies. You mention in her personality that she was severely bullied in school (and can you please take the word "bullied" out of capslock and use italics to emphasise the word), however in her history you mentioned that she was homeschooled, and the name "Rose" is in there.

Her history needs quite a bit of changing. Too much of that history is all about Alison's parents and grandparents and hardly anything about Alison herself. How did she break her hand trying to break in a horse? When did she learn to ride? What discipline does she ride and or excel in? How did Alison and her mother drift apart?

The history and personality need to reflect things in her likes and dislikes. You also need to look at your grammar: you are missing spaces where there should be, you have capitalised words that need it (names and the start of a sentence), and nanny is a position, not a title unless you are directly talking about someone, ie: Nanny Megan. And we are still technically a "normal" school, it's just that we have the added option of equestrian classes, and a boarding school to boot.